Score: 10

"Hilarious"

submission: Bambee

date: February 29, 2008

Haven't seen something like this in a while.

Kudos.

Score: 8

"Niiice"

submission: Gravity's Just a Theory

date: January 21, 2008

It was pretty kewl. If you were going for the whole "Defying the laws of physics" thing, I've seen better, but you still did a good job with the animation and flow with the music.
The only turnoff for me was that it could've been a bit more random. I'm not talking about like an animutation, but like something that would excite the viewer and make them say "What the crap?!"

Score: 8

"for a thirteen year old..."

submission: Freezepop's JEM!

date: January 21, 2008

That was pretty good. I liked how you animated the blue blob with such prestige and craftsmanship. Your dancing skills are niiiice and you voice is beautiful.

Score: 10

"brilliant"

submission: TANKMEN .5

date: January 21, 2008

I liked this one. Sweet animation with good humor.
And I found the bonus scence - BA WAH HAHAHA

Score: 0

"Useful for timing? Nobody's gonna use this!"

submission: First timer

date: January 8, 2008

~Bad~
No sound
No animation
No entertainment
No interactivity

~Good~
Useful

Now, I know there may be some people who would want to use it as a stopwatch, but there are better, fancier ones out there one the internet. Maybe add audio, animation, the ability to switch between minutes and seconds, more features, or SOMETHING.
You said you didn't know anything about actionscript, so, if programming isn't your game, why not try animating? It's the least you could do to improve.
If people wanted to use a stopwatch, they aren't going to go online, go to newgrounds, find this submission, and click play, only to find that it doesn't measure in minutes, because stopwatches HAVE been invented.

Score: 8

"Pretty good for a sprite animation"

submission: Smash Kingdom

date: December 9, 2007

Humor - About 75% of the scenes were funny while everything else was cheesy 12 year old stuff. "Did we just do it?". That line seemed kinda childish. Something better would be like "I THINK I'M PREGNANT!". That would make me laugh. :D

Graphics - Everything is sprites. Although you zoomed in too much, sometimes they were out of proportion (when you see Kirby and Solid Snake in the same scene), sometimes things were out of perspective (in the first scene, when kirby jumps on the spring, the spring is out of perspective with the landscape), and sometimes you mixed video game eras and it looked ugly (NES and SNES sprites together), the animation was smooth, so credits for that :D

Overall - While most of it was great, it's the little things that keep me from giving this animation a 10 in the animation department as well as some of the humor, but other than that, Excellent work.

Score: 5

"Boring."

submission: Still Alive - Portal

date: December 8, 2007

I'm not sure about you, but when I watch a music video, I don't want to watch some amateur-animated face singing with little-to-no detail. The only other part you used was when you see stickmen running and doing stuff. It got really boring and repetitive. I think you should use more emotion by adding different moods and having the moods change throughout the video. I really saw no actual mood in this video.

~Improve~
Add moods to the video (i.e. animate with shades of blue only)
Use more than just a simple-animated face.
Use your own ideas, instead of the ones from Portal. I know you love it, but try to be original.

~Good parts~
Cute. That's it. Cute. I would give you credit for the song, but you didn't make it.

Score: 4

"Needs more, man."

submission: 3D Bernie [High qaulity]

date: November 29, 2007

~THE GOOD~
Cool effect
~THE BAD~
Unoriginal (you didn't make the character, nor invent the effect)
Needs more (it's just a screen with a 3-D effect)
Useless unless you have 3-D glasses
The effect doesn't work too well. I see the top half of his face unaffected.
~Improve~
Add more(i.e., more characters, backgrounds, more graphics, detail the characters)
Be more original and maybe you can use your own character.
Make something that people can watch, enjoy, and repeat, not watch, say "wow" for two seconds, then go do something else.

Score: 8

"Nice"

submission: Legend Of Zelda:Misguided

date: November 22, 2007

That was perfect at the end. I would give a 10, but the animation was somewhat lacking. However, pretty good for your first flash!

Score: 9

"Great"

submission: The Hobbit - Act I

date: November 20, 2007

Forget the criticizers who don't like the animation. They don't understand the storybook quality and how it's supposed to look like a children's book. It's supposed to look like that.
I would give a 10 for all that hard work, but the Humor was somewhat unsatisfying.